MARY&MAY Tranexamic Acid + Glutathione Eye Cream

-Reworded the first sentence to make it more engaging and highlight the key benefits of the product
-Use of bullet points with dashes instead of asterisks for better readability
-Use of a richer and more varied vocabulary (target, fade, boost, etc.)
-Added short hook sentences to give rhythm to the text and make it more dynamic
-Highlighting the ethical side of the product from the start to meet consumer expectations

-Using the tip of your ring finger, gently apply a small amount of product around your eyes. Pat gently to promote absorption.
-Use this product twice a day, morning and evening.

-Purified Water, Ethylhexyl Palmitate, Glycereth-26, Glycerin, Cetearyl Alcohol, Niacinamide, Hydrogenated Poly(C6-14 Olefin), Beeswax, Caprylic/Capric Triglyceride, Polyglyceryl-2 Stearate, Dipropylene Glycol, Isododecane, Glyceryl Stearate, Hydroxyethyl Acrylate/ Sodium Acryloyldimethyl Taurate Copolymer, Stearyl Alcohol, Glycol Stearate SE, Sodium Polyacrylate, Hydroxyacetophenone, Stearic Acid, Dimethiconol, Dimethicone/Vinyl Dimethicone Crosspolymer, Hydrogenated Polydecene, Hydrogenated Lecithin, Tranexamic Acid (1,000ppm), Betaine, Glutathione (1,000ppm), Panthenol, Fragrance , Hippophae Rhamnoides Fruit Oil, Butylene Glycol, Adenosine, Sorbitan Isostearate, Caprylyl Glycol, Trideceth-6, 1,2-Hexanediol, Disodium EDTA, Sodium Hyaluronate, Ascorbic Acid